How long is dis road ahead??
How far am I from da end??
How much longer do I have to go??
How much longer do I have to bear dis??
Grant me one wish my lord….
Grant me da power to abandon dis road
Grant me one wish my lord.
Grant me da power to call it quits weneva I want to
Dis is a tiring journey my lord
And u took away my only companion…
The only companion I eva wanted…
I’ve heard ppl say…”every 1 deserves a second chance….”
I ask u my lord….y wasn’t dis true for her??
Y wasn’t she granted her second chance??
Did u think that she had erred??
She had erred to be my companion??
I may not be your favorite child……
I may not be da one u liked….
But isn’t a child a child after all??
I may have wronged u sum way…but was it really dat bad??
Justice I thot was equal for all…
It was I who had erred….den y did she have to leave??
Dis journey wid out my companion…
is waay more harsh den death
but maybe…..maybe u wanted it dis way…..
u wanted me to suffer
to suffer da curse of knowing….
Dat my luv had died coz of no one else but me
But lemme ask u something ,my lord
Maybe U were da one to show us da lite of day..
Maybe U were da one to pave our journey on dis very road
But how does dis give u da right……
Da right to end da road for sum1….weneva u want to????
To end dis journey...I don’t have da mite
I may have wronged u my lord….
But dis journey I wanna continue no more
Grant me one wish my lord
I wish to c da end of dis road now
I have suffered ‘nuf my lord
I cant bare it no more…don’t u think…I’ve had ‘nuf??
I beg of u my lord…free me
Free me from ur shackles of life
How far am I from da end??
How much longer do I have to go??
How much longer do I have to bear dis??
Grant me one wish my lord….
Grant me da power to abandon dis road
Grant me one wish my lord.
Grant me da power to call it quits weneva I want to
Dis is a tiring journey my lord
And u took away my only companion…
The only companion I eva wanted…
I’ve heard ppl say…”every 1 deserves a second chance….”
I ask u my lord….y wasn’t dis true for her??
Y wasn’t she granted her second chance??
Did u think that she had erred??
She had erred to be my companion??
I may not be your favorite child……
I may not be da one u liked….
But isn’t a child a child after all??
I may have wronged u sum way…but was it really dat bad??
Justice I thot was equal for all…
It was I who had erred….den y did she have to leave??
Dis journey wid out my companion…
is waay more harsh den death
but maybe…..maybe u wanted it dis way…..
u wanted me to suffer
to suffer da curse of knowing….
Dat my luv had died coz of no one else but me
But lemme ask u something ,my lord
Maybe U were da one to show us da lite of day..
Maybe U were da one to pave our journey on dis very road
But how does dis give u da right……
Da right to end da road for sum1….weneva u want to????
To end dis journey...I don’t have da mite
I may have wronged u my lord….
But dis journey I wanna continue no more
Grant me one wish my lord
I wish to c da end of dis road now
I have suffered ‘nuf my lord
I cant bare it no more…don’t u think…I’ve had ‘nuf??
I beg of u my lord…free me
Free me from ur shackles of life
7 comments:
thas a damn cool piece of poetry man. Glad to c u been coming up on stuff like this. But i hope it dsnt relate totally to u.
coz that wud mean that ur seriously frustrated or smthn. Dont get me wrong mate. The poem is bloody brilliant. I cud feature it in wings of poesy (with the correct spellings ofcourse)
But why u so mad dawg?
relax a lil...lords watchin over u...and so am i!
Dog, the title totally goes with the poem. It's a chilled out piece of stuff to come up with.
unlike bhoth man, i would hope in a way that it actually relates to you, because only by experiencing these feelings will you be able to write about it. Its harsh, but only those who go through some hard feelings can come up with nice writing pieces.
Rock on HBK!
ok krish..u surely have imprvd.....good piece of wrk der..keep up d good wrk dude!!!!!!!!!!!!btw am still thnkin abt d "she" in d poem!!!!!!!!lolz
Louis MacNiece wrote a poem entitled 'Prayer Before Birth'... here is a poem which should be, arguably, entitled 'Life's Last Prayer'.
A powerful blend of emotions and desires, culminating in the capture of one's senses and capable of moving the hardest hearts!
Kudos!
Cheers,
-Johnny Deep.
so mr.poet....bloody ho!! u hav shocked me really!!! that was an awesome piece of poetry!! n its unlike u...not that i feel that u dont hav feelings that deep, but coz i dint imagine u cud portray them soooo well....its really great..n it ws a very pleasant surprise..im sure the others r great as well n do keep surprising me with these!!! rock on poet....
See, i told you, you could flip people out with your writing. but you just didn't want to listen to me, see now how your pieces attract such strong and encouraging reactions.
write more man, you have a deeper pot of emotions in you than what you actually exhibit.
its good............. but I don want this road of urs 2 end......... nt b4 me atleast........ also if u stay in this road........... u may get a second chance........... which u already mentiond.
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